Love In The Line Of Fire - Reviews

Yah untuk cerita dan konsep seperti ini saya sangat suka, dan dari chapter pertama sampai 19 , tidak membosankan untuk di baca , ?????????????????

All I can say is that a few chapters in and I almost died from how mentally retarted the protagonist is.......,...................................................................................

Finally, it came back! My god, I almost died from waiting.As for the review,Hmmmm~ I actually don't know what to say. Maybe "Stop wasting your time with my review and start reading already!"Also, don't forget to write a review and vote for it with power stones.On behalf of our dear author, I thank you!(LOL, I look like someone who was paid by the author to write a review.)

the story was cool, but the author managed to **** her at unbelievable levels, the guy managed to make mc harem turn futas, good guy not only gave up this story as I advise everyone not read you will regret, except who likes mc being ****ed by futas

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Seriously Man!                                                               Are you really calling these  less than 200 words a chapters? ?

I think it has a great start. I couldn't help but find it has unique story line. the sentence making has some flows but i think you can overcome it by the time . And lastly I hope this story find a great future.

Nana is really talented at creating both a spicy adult novel aswell as an engaging and  entertaining story.If you’re looking for a some mature harem fantasy you’ve found the goldmine.Content with an engaging story ☑️Enjoyable characters and interactions ☑️Well written and spicy adult scenes ☑️Diverse cast of women ☑️Emotional and individual characteristics ☑️Well written MC and Cast ☑️Warning; you might just have trouble putting down the story.

Slush just snorted and ignored his comment. Meanwhile Aurora wondered how they could convince one of them to follow her. What was the best course of action? Usually, the hardest part was to find one of them but here, the frogs were everywhere, she just needed to convince one without using words.

At this point everyone outside is staring at the hole and some even starting screaming and shouting something about "THIS IS THE END OF THE WORLD" and the crowd starts to get rowdy. Kyouka got scared by whats happening and wanted to go back to the house and tried to pull Kenji along with him. Kenji however, seemed to not realize that Kyouka is pulling him and she realized that he was frowning and giving the hole a blank stare. Kyouka tugged harder at his sleeve to urge him to move but all he did was to turn and say,

The servant bowed and departed

Peter: ayyeeeii kinikilig si tol XD