LOVE IN SECRET - Reviews

I am sorry, but this is sadly a good novel. I made it 21 chapters in, I quit because there is no logic in the story. An enemy ’s troops die to the MC, so he leveled up. That makes no sense. Also has some anti west prejudices, with characters made at the “west” for no reason. The only way for this to be funny is if the “dragon country” is Wales. Also a translation of adventurer was changed to hero for no reason.

Watch them picked this thing over everything else.............................................................................................

"Okay," Ichigo replied causing everyone's eyes to widen in horror.

What startled Yi Yun even more, was that a middle aged women was riding on the weird beast. With a commanding aura, she sat cross legged on top of it with a sword slung across her back. Because of the angle, Yi Yun could not see her face, but his blood had frozen over as the person sitting on top of the wild beast, was over ten times more terrifying than the wild beast.

I took the silver knife out and stabbed him with it.

Ottar's hand was pierced by blades that erupted from Shirou's back, piercing his hand and his leg.

"Slutty much?"  Ana muttered under her breathe as she turned to glance out the window. Sasha looked at Ana puzzled. "Disculpeme?" The word immediately complemented her Spanish accent.

"Saya berpikir untuk tinggal di desa ini. Saya tidak tahu dimana saya berasal. Saya hanya tahu ketika saya terbangun saya berada di dalam hutan.

"Apa? " Kata Ibunya kaget.

"No. There might be something wrong happening here..." I whisper and I enter our classroom and he nowhere to be found.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Nice but you can do better. I wish you a good