Reviewing myself because why not. I personally feel that my first chapter is better than most I have read on here. The first 40ish chapters will feel like they were too fast but I did that to give the readers a kind of outline of how the future of the book is. Granted the future arcs are going to feel way too long lol. I plan on this book being a few thousand chapters and each month y'all keep this book in the top 10 I will release an extra 30 chapters. (but that is way into the future lol)