Translation is overall good and does get easier to understand though few odd choices every now and then but the heart sutra translation...is very weird quite different from the translation I'm used to though granted the meaning is the same which I think is a good way to sum up the translation quality, there's not many wrong translations just odd choices, the weird consistently inconstant use of Chinese remains prevalent.As for the novel itself, it's quite irritating - There are a large amount of really good arcs, characters and relationships but Literally every problem that arises could be avoided or solved if Ming Feizhen stopped fucking around and knowing that makes a lot of the instances very irritating even though it is a comedic story, it still prickles and while the novel doesn't have the romance tag on this site it's in a weird phase where I would say it probably should be some what of a romance novel but at the same time not considering it's being used as a motivating factor, teased often yet its very brief and little results of it at times. The changing perspective is sometimes a bit difficult to notice at times but there is always something to indicate it at some point which is saving it.
