Lost in the Blue Mountains - Reviews

writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for otherscharacter design is okthe updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible eitherworld background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it isfyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos

he named it after a dying star and believed the world was born cause of it's deaththe thing is he was dying and he built it................

It's generic trash, don't get why people defend it, i see a couple of bots in the reviews as well, pls don't translate any more of this type except if it is actually good

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I am writing this because there is a limit of 140 words.... Even I don't know why such limit is to be imposed but as I was saying I have reached the limit

This is such an amazing novel that needs more recognition. Najib is such a talented writer that he can just make a masterpiece with eyes closed!.. All my love and support.. Denise Ashley

"mas, sentuh aku dan hangatkan aku mas" balas clara,  sehingga menimbulkan keteganggan bagi angga, angga pun sudah tegang dan tidak menyiakan waktu lagi. angga langsung menyentuh tubuh clara dengan lembut sehingga mereka terbuai untuk saling menyentuh.

Rias: …I…told you…it won't work on me…that easily…Dusk…!

Will I do it?

1.) Create a treasure for future space and training

Hi ? I’m the author of this wonderful book and I’m shamelessly giving it a five star rating like I've seen other authors do ?  I hope you fall in love with Evangeline’s story because I put my heart and soul into writing every line. ❤️ I love love love you ??

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