Writing quality: It's better than what is expected of a newbie author. The only improvement needed is that author must work on conveying things in a much clearer and better way and keep things subtle and to the point.
Update quality: Not very good. Author should upload more frequently. Atleast 3-5 chpts/week so that us readers stay connected and don't have to suffer from waiting for too long.
Story development: There are only a few chapters so cannot comment much on it. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, atleast that's what I can tell from the available chapters.
Character design: It's good as of now. I can imagine the characters the author describes. The only point of criticism here is that author must reduce the narration a bit and have side characters as well as main character interact a little more.
World background: Like I've said in story development, there are few chapters so cannot comment much on the world building aspect.
All in all, it's a good read for all readers who are into sci-fi genre. A good novel with good potential. Keep up the goodwork author :)
