lord of creation : The hidden power within - Reviews

different storyline loved it  ... ...️

I gave it a try since it had some good reviews. Overall a good story but there is too many ocs because its set in the future. That makes it hard for me to care about anything after the highschool arc. I think that if you had set the story in the past it wouldve have been more interesting but thats personnal preference. Overall Great main character and if you like ocs and dont care about being familiar with the players he will play against this story is for you but not for me.

I think author should delete the spammed reviews because it's too much. Anyways, the plot and concept is kinda interesting but the execution is lacking. HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHUHAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHUl

so far  so good ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The language the writer uses is getting along with the atmosphere in the story. They can make it impactful and also humorous especially the battle through the card scenes, there're some characters that are quite nuts and crazy reducing the tension. Even so, I didn't feel annoyed at them but laughed instead. However, I just have one problem.. that is I wish for like 100 chapters update a day!!!

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"What the fuck?"  I ask.

Effect – As the life will progress, there will be many ideas and knowledge you forget due to your brain limited ability. This ability will make your Soul an Archive for information similar to a library, the archive will record all the information you classify as important.

I was growing tired of the curiosity, so i lit a candle that was on my bedside furniture. Careful and quietly i opened my door, held my breath and passed down the hallway. I slowly passed in front my parents room and went down stairs. When i reached the back door i searched for my little machete. I tucked in behind me and started jogging across the backyard. I didn't know what to exactly do once i reached the fence, but this time nothing will stop me to find out what is calling me from inside the forest. As i reached the fence i started to breathe faster. The warm feeling came again through the forest,

"That depends on you." The soft, feather light voice explained almost apologetically. Kyera turned then, and looked up into that black beak like mask. Her eyes glittered like jewels in the sockets.

"Yeah, I am looking for someone. So can I join or not?"

bell has been ringing and now William is outside the classroom, just go around while looking at his school environment.