Living in the Zombie Apocalypse with a Shopping System - Reviews

I would really appreciate the way how the Author describes the plot alongside the characters- it's kind of an unique thing indeed, to be said.
Furthermore- the story has a clear picturing of events happening, so readers won't find it failing their craves.
Overall- it's a good and nicely written piece of work, just needs the author to re-visit and re-edit the initial chapters- making it more grammatically perfect![img=update]

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CROCO LIKES IT
COROC GIVES 5 STAR

Here is my honest review XD
The story telling is amazing and im loving the wacky ideas. The plot seems to progress nicely and the character development seems steady and well paced.
There are a few grammar mistakes in terms of tenses and word choice but those are passable. If you need deeper information just message me.
I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more.
(At the time of this review only 9 chapters had been published)

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It is a good story if you like a zombie apocalypse world where the MC slowly introduce the background plot and his preparations to once again engage in a bloody battle.