Lily: The last lily of a forgotten world. - Reviews

Lily: The last lily of a forgotten world.
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Great novel so far Keep up the good work. alsO the relase pace is good.......................................’’)&(&;@;@;@?9’@@@@‘’@9@“/$?;&3$:?
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Sorry but I read the first few chapters and this wasn't very good. I sort of like the premise but it doesn't feel like the author wants to take the time to actually think about or write a story. Just look at how it starts. We don't get a chapter about the mc's previous life. We don't get one about him getting his system. We don't get a chapter where he makes a serious attempt to recruit people that wasn't moronic and obviously going to end with cops chasing him (He actually needs a mental hospital if he thought recruiting small children in front of their school was a good idea, regardless of whether his cultivation is real.) We don't get any explanation for why he thought that was a good idea or why he was that desperate outside of what we know from the summary. We don't get any real comedy that wasn't just rehashed from the summary. All we get is MC tries to kidnap children and doesn't get arrested for some reasonMC laments his incompetenceMC eavesdrops on old manMC tries to convince old manOld man agrees out of pityThe premise is fun like I said but it feels like the author is putting the minimum amount of effort into the actual story. I thought maybe it would get better in the next chapter but the author didn't even want to write about the MC finding more students. Instead for some reason the old man calls a bunch of his friends over so that the MC, and more importantly the author, don't have to put even a small amount of effort or thought into that issue. Then in the third chapter the MC gets clones who can cultivate for him so he can continue to put no effort into life. It's like the author's laziness is infecting his character...
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The character design is flawed. The MC is one of the best doctors and a modern man, but he agreed to a deal without even assessing the situation first as soon as he heard the salary. Very naive for a genius doctor.Childish behavior is another problem with the character design. He doesn't act or think like an educated doctor at all.
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Not too good. I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe.Comedy aspect is lacking.I didnt connect to the characeters
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Great book , good concept , not many chapters as of this review , but the world building and story look interesting as of this moment. Amazing job author !
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I recommend you guys to read this this story is different from other novel like this when I first read it I started to like it and I can't stop reading it so i recommend it to all of you guys.
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"That's right," Anna cackled victoriously. "Pay up! It's time to power level."
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Hati heard my voice and immediately retreated to me.
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One of my favorite stories on here. The party dynamic is fun, the characters themselves have their goofy moments but at the same time feel fully realized, and Jotou is wonderful as a protagonist. She’s flawed but can use those flaws as a strength, struggles with growth in an interesting and engaging way and it’s just wonderful how those struggles play off of the rest of the party. Plus, as a trans woman, her utter nonchalance at the genderbending tickles me.The relationships between characters is probably my favorite part of the story. The characters rib eachother to express their care and play off of eachother while still getting serious if the situation calls for it.Overall, wonderful, the story does an amazing job balancing serious and severe situations with comedic and playful ones without it seeming out of place or one overwhelming the other. I’ll immediately eating up anything this author writes, and keep up the great work.
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The author clearly made effort with the writing, which is appreciated in a sea of mistranslations. So far, good pacing, nice creativity, and we can see a bit of a cliché story, but it's been approached nicely! Keep it up
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------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 1 is an amazing chapter perfect blend of fantasy and urban the plot line is amazing too can't wait to read future chapters.

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