well...
there are 40 chapter but after 8 of them i can't read anymore...
The story goes far too fast and the author try to joke a bit but it isn't funny at all...
maybe it'll be better later but it's too much for me
we don't know anything about the MC and it's like a reproduction of other novel so no thank you
I like original novel but this time... I won't read further
Good luck in the futur
You need to learn grammar and spell check it it hurts my eyes looking how sloppy this work is go **** yourself your not qualified to write. Go back learning basic and importantly your words are **** like heavey what the **** is that spelling .
Amazing novel keep up the good work..
No harem please also try getting someone to proofread for you.............................................................................................................................. ......
Just some typo mistakes correction ,the story will be more amazing.
English is not my first language, but i understood what you want to deliver .
Keep going, best wishes *****
I read the first few chapters an i was like meh but i read more and i laughed until tears came out .
But you should edit the first chaptes and write more about cultivation realms and thier level.
