Life’s Pareto Equilibrium - Between the Choppy Waves & Serene Field. - Reviews

This is an interesting novel. The emotion pours out of the characters, and the descriptions are really poetic. My only concern is with the plot development, where I feel like it takes a while to see where the novel is going. The first chapter is a bit heavy on the information load, but apart from that, good job.

I genuinely really like this novel. The characters are really well written and the interactions between them is simply superb. It is rather rare when a novel can make you feel emotion alongside the characters but this one certainly succeeded on that front!

Well done Author!

owemji north i just read the first chapter and you are getting better at writing compared to the other book. not that it isn't good. this book flows much better. i will be looking forward to the reading the rest of the story.

The sypnosis are so detailed which makes the readers happy. The book displays the culture and the tradition which i love personally  . so ,  i would totally read it.

The narrative style is different but well written with clear ideas.

The childhood nostalgia and the essence of family and values was well portrayed. The effects of loss and grief and the understanding and support from the family and friends were really heartwarming.

But there are many instances of tense switches and missing punctuation marks. And I suggest breaking your paragraphs into smaller chunks which will make it easy to read and digest.

All in all, a book with great potential. A bit of editing and polishing will definitely make it shine.
All the best

This book is really superb. The author has weaved the synopsis really well. what I find fascinating in this book are: the culture was really shown. The tradition and values were also highlighted. The descriptions are vivid. Though I do not have much interest in orchestra, I could still imagine the music filling the air. Kudos to the author!

I got this as a recommendation from my friend, marichat_nettenoir. I read this book quite quickly and I loved it. Kudos to the author

I love this book! To the author, please post more chapters, this book is interesting, the plot flows quite nicely. [img=update][img=recommend]

I can comprehend the story line, it’s never easy to lead a celebrity life. The emotions felt real, I know to a certain extend it is. Thank for shedding light to this story. The struggle to love beyond the norm it’s never easy it the eyes of others.  Thank you for sharing your story with us anonymously.

I really like this novel, not only is the sypnosis really clear for readers the plot of the story is interesting too, Good luck to the author, I wish you the best of luck

I loved the way author wrote this story especially the narrative style of the characters and their interactions. I haven't read a story which describes  culture and traditions, it is evident that author has done a really good job. The writing quality,the plot build up everything about this story is awesome. Looking forward for more chapters.
Keep up the good work author.