unfortunately the botched attempt at comedy (which is the main focus of the first 7 chapters that I read) makes it unreadable for me, and I would guess that anyone above the age of 12 would likely share that opinion. Save yourself some time and avoid it.
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“Okay. Stay safe.” After seeing the husband off, the wife raised her head to look at the leaves and said, “I think my husband is going to cheat on me soon. Should I… just restart this world?”believe me he won't hahaha
I am still continuing the series but I am concerned about the author's update rate. He is not updating continously for a long time. Somtimes he does and sometime he doesn't. That is the only concern.
hmmm... This is a nicely written, well-thought out world that the author has created here. The way the character interactions go is satisfying and refreshing compared to other similar reincarnation or transmigration stories. It is a good read if u r looking for some magic and isekai action, but since the author is new to writing, I would advice being lenient with some stuff. For the Author: You are doing a good job so far and I hope u keep improving and providing us with attractive chaps
GET IT WHILE IT'S FREE! Okay so I'm not saying this is better than Shadow Slave or Supreme Magus. But it's certainly on par with them. It starts as a rom-com teen / lighthearted transmigration story.... and then BAM. It gets dark. It gets real. It's brilliantly told and flawlessly executed. The growth, the aging through time, the sentence structure, atmosphere and world building. It's perfect. I have zero complaints.
