Life Revolution (English Ver.) - Reviews

this book is similar to the book of my ex-wife gave to quintruplets. nice but the male lead here is so irretating heartless.

??? this guys is really making money of someone else book ??? the original book is Lord Of The People: My Explosion Rate Is 100%.

Mc is weak super..  Even girls is stronger than him.. He is the one doing face slapping but his plot armor saving his ass every time..   Haixt..  I'm really not fond of a weak Mc that likes getting save always by someone he knows. It's better if he's the one fucking killing them or face slapping them. But here mc is just the one making trouble then his plot armor will face slap his enemies.  Every chapter Mc always offend someone. It's like the Mc routine everyday.. It's like Mc can't live without offending people . For me it's okay if he always trigger   enemies if he is strong. but  here mc offends stronger enemies always but he is fucking weak..and in modern world the people is fucking strong .even Mc have a cheat. I'm really annoyed rather enjoying reading this SHITTY novel.waste of time

chapters seems too short and story doesn't seemed to move up. It feels like while watching slideshow of pictures even before reaching the end you get stuck  somewhere in middle. Seems unreasonable to wait day or two then purchase coins/passes to unlock a chapter and after end of each chapter feel like got kicked in stomach.  Please either Increase how much story develops in single chapter or request application finance team to decrease  cost for coin and increasing power of passes as at most single pass unlocks single chapter that gives readers nothing but fillers between main events.It would be nice to have one pass unlock multiple chapters.

Character build-up and story development is pretty decent but the only problem is gauging the power of each stage in cultivation,  difference is somewhat hard to understand :)

Part of a review swap, and at time of reading, there are 14 chapters.To be brutally honest, this genre is not my cup of tea. The word "suicide" itself turns me off, as I don't like anything remotely dark. Violence, is fine strangely enough.Anyway! On with the review.Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical erros wouldn't be seen by me. However, I would suggest Author to :(i) Ensure proper capitalisation of words(ii) Have more paragraphs, especially when it's a dialogue. Would make the reading smoother. When a paragraph is too big, those who read using an app would find the huge chunk of text off-puttingStability of Updates: 5* in good faithStory Development: It's certainly a good start and is developing well. You can see how the death of the sister was the catalyst to him turning out / becoming better. It's a unique perspective for me (can't say if this is new, or fresh as I don't normally read this genre). Character Design/World Background: So far, so good. The pace is there, the development is well.All the best Author. :)

WRITING QUALITY IS AMAZING. AUTHOR CONTINUOUSLY WORKING ON HIS IDEAS. ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE MANAGED WELL. I LIKE THE PRESENTATION AND WORK OF AUTHOR.RECOMMANDING THIS NOVEL.

a five star All the way great story?pity you locked on chapter five Author please open so we can read..…........................................☺️

I don't recommend this novel, the story is all about war, and it's so boring. You can count on your fingers how many times the female lead and male lead have their love interactions. I don't know if I should call it love when I'm at 1200  chapters, and they still haven't even kissed. ? It's not worth reading, but if you're into war stories, go ahead and take a risk. ?

What honour Sang Ge has, to receive such longing from you...

Thus he began to look. Having trained with Kalifa, he knew a bit about her, and though their conversation was rather minimal on their journey to Marineford, he believed he knew enough.

"Kau masih saja keras kepala." ucapnya setelah itu. Terlalu lama dalam tatapan itu, segera kulepaskan pandanganku darinya. Kembali mengamati pemandangan disana.