Life Clouds; Someone's Mystery Gaze - Reviews

BTW, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! When you buy the chapters, please just buy chapters with title only. If there's no title, please don't buy, not yet because its only a sneak peek and not complete. Please be patient and I do hope you enjoy this story. I won't drag it too much, no worries about that.

I really liked the description. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all.Highly recommend!!Great job author!!!????

A family friend recommended me this book, I’m not a web novel reader but I like this story. I will probably read it till it’s free

For a reference I read what was free. The grammar is ok with minor errors here and there. The story hasn’t really taken off for me yet but it is progressing slowly. In the free chapters the class system isn’t really explored by the MC. He has no skills or abilities yet either. He also hasn’t used the dagger he found even though he is aware it is special, where is the gamers curiosity? He also took a while to use his SP after lvling up. The readers also get a hint about vampires and the other country having them in the real world but nothing else about the stories main story line. The MC also doesn’t seem to have anything special about him or unique to make him stand out yet. I do like how he killled NPCs to lvl up like a true assassin. Also I would stop repeating your last chapter in the next one even if it doesn’t effect the cost readers will interpret it as doing so. Hope your story does good in the future.

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Thanks for chapter..... pls update soon ??

mc x  harem

Cara looked down on the mountains below and frowned. Scattered throughout the scenery were splotches of black and brown, where no flora grew. She grumbled to herself at the destruction the unregulated pollution was causing, and she didn't want to see it continued. The further south she looked the worse the damage became, while the north seemed aglow with vibrant greenery.

"I can see at least 1,573 impurities," said Cara as she looked through. In Weapon Cultivation, impurities were forced out during the equivalent to the 'cracked core' stage. Having fewer than 5,000 meant Cara's weapon would have a tremendous advantage in the next stage.

"Here we are," Chad announced, slowing the car to a stop.

"I'M DONE-" Akira yelled as he threw his front doors open, panting.

Rukia looked at Ichigo's bandages as she was on the verge of tears. She genuinely considered him a friend and was quite hurt seeing his state.