Level Up Extra - Reviews

es algo complicado de leer, los pronombres y el género son confusos, tal vez deberías de corregir los errores gramaticales. en si la historia no te engancha y se siente muy... genérico? o sosa no se cómo describirlo. pero necesitas un editor

I really like your work i hope you dont drop this i am really looking forward to your work I hope that you dont drop this and can you release more chapters i am really looking forward to it

worth reading... amazing writing

such a sweet story. More updates please

Why only 4 Chapters are updated daily, the story is being dragged, now David is in the ship it will take another more than 8 chapters for them to reach their final destination, just pulling the story and for David to reach Sacred Saint I think it will take more than 100 Chapters