Let them offer their loyalty! - Reviews

honestly it was one of best in starting bcoz of its unique mc with good humour , being logical , no simpness and dark type mc above that who really understands importance of k owledge .  It was honestly good novel in starting but gstarted going downhill like many ither chinese novel bcoz of many same reason as others like illogical crap , firced wrting , forced situations to make mc hype more ,and then that forced romance shit honestly .from the the moment romance shit i mean Fmc was introduced he stopped being the mche was in starting . became a total simp . and many things started get illogical honestly . many things are forced justifyied also . It us a story for ppl who foolow blindly any shit aithors put , and any shit mc does. and yeah those Ship lover also will like this crap .

What makes this story different than the other Hollywood stories is that this feels more like a slice of life. It goes into more detail about the process of creating a movie and its obvious the author has done their research. After reading up to chapter 60 it also seems like there's probably no harem and the story just seems way more realistic.

The background is well built and the character interactions are wholesome.Tthe female lead is too much wholesome that she does crazy thing some for him like going and threatening a gobling lord of the dungeon...Anyway the story is super good so please start writing again

It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works

Raw please...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

But, what does this have anything to do with him? Where were his legs? Why was there a silhouette of his body?

"Yes Mr Cram, she's been working non stop for the past couple of days now" said Leiya as she sighed.

Aslan is a 19 year old college dropout, working at a telemarketing company.

She then took a book that was floating in front of her.

And all that glitters is gold

I’m sorry, ot seems like a great book but no one, and I mean NO ONE, is that dense or stupid. It just completely lost me. I get trying to create a story but it really just feels forced.

Biased review, since I am the authorAlso, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.