Leo n‘ Kitty - Reviews

Good work author, the story is different from others which makes it unique, interesting synopsis too, I'm liking the MC already, although this story is still in it early stage but I can tell it has a lot of potentials so I'm rooting for Ya, and I'm also expected of it. Keep up the good work.

The story thus far is quite developed. The writing style is engaging and pleasant to read; the hilarity of the bugs in the system make me want to keep reading more! This is the first original book that I have really enjoyed reading.

This book is insane ? great story about man with his past reincarnation in his body and item creation system. His easy control losing is great and sense of humor is perfect.

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Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!

•Post Analysis:

"Hm, interesting," she replied.  "You probably don't even know how impressive getting 6th place is.  This academy has existed for hundreds of years, and almost everyone who ranked highly on these leaderboards went on to become a powerful figure.  Well, if they didn't die before they could accomplish that.  It's been seventy years since someone placed in the top ten on this leaderboard."

"What?" Surprised to hear that, he turned his face to her.

So they waited the next morning to see who else was available for adoption around Konoha. All seven shinobi gathered in the living room, focusing on the door and waiting for whoever may be walking in.

Ultraman Started in 1960s to present day.

Her skin was naturally tan and silky, with such a smooth skin even water will flow down without embarrassing with an attempt to wet it. Her body should be have been carded out with the highest grade jade know only to the supreme being.She was more then perfect and with beauty for exceeding the imagining capabilities of the great artists.

nice story with characters and story plots