Leisure Life : My Secret Portal to Pleasure! - Reviews

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This book is a wonderful read. I look forward to spending lost in the story everyday. I am so glad that the name grabbed my attention and I decided to read it.

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Using dai mu bai eyes the evil eyed white tiger sage saw hu mao on tao shoulder as he suddenly feel even more chill "wha...wha...what kind of beast is that? How come my bloodline feel fear?"

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Thanks for the chapter!!!!! Keep up the amazing work nexus

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"Ha? But we've done this for billions years. Then why can you say this is a game?" Light looked confused.

Nothing interesting .  FL is a pushover .

I wasn't even able to read a full chapter. And to be honest, it was due in a very large part, to the many numerous punctuation mistakes in just the first few paragraphs. It almost makes me think as though this was made using some type of ai writing software. And if I were the author of this, which thank heavens I am not, then I would seriously think about doing a complete rethink and rewrite of this story. But until then, I am leaving this review, as a way let others know, that until this story is either improved to where no clear punctuation mistakes or made, or it is completely rewritten. Then do yourself a favor, and don't read it until one of the two aforementioned things in this review or done.

excellent read, your update schedule leaves something to be desired.