Legendary Fisherman of legendary fishing - Reviews

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
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I think it has a great start. I couldn't help but find it has unique story line. the sentence making has some flows but i think you can overcome it by the time . And lastly I hope this story find a great future.

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as someone who dosent actualy enjoy fishing I find ur story enjoyable so far and I hope u stick to the whole fishing thing uv got going on on 5 chapters in so that's why I gave u all 4s not really enough to properly judge for most of them catagories yet