Legend of the Gunslinger Mage - Reviews

You said it’s not cool to read 1 chapter and drop 1 star reviews? Your right, that’s fucking gay. Whoever does that should kill themselves. What is cool though, is not reading a single chapter and drop a 5 star review. You ask, why is that cool? Because it just is, don’t question it. So now author, I ask you a question. How’s your day?

I like the concept, but it really identical to the novel,"World Online" were mc is also betrayed by his closest friend in-game then wakes up a week before the game launch. But yeah, this novels good one.

Obligatory author's self-promotion :)

The genre is pretty cliched, but I hope to bring something new and exciting to it. Please stick around. Things will get interesting soon.

Thank you and have a nice day.

Writing Quality is great, there are no rough sentences, easy to understand and the way you write the fighting scenes are good.(Kiss Of Death, Oof... I remembered DitF)
Stability Updates are also good, I assume you update almost everyday.
Story Development is also good, the pace is good, the fighting are good... Though, I think some of the elements are already used though, but there's no harm done, it is still unique it it's own way.
Character Design is good, in Ch1, there are already too many characters, there are those that are based on some Movie or Greek mythology(Thrain, son of Thor,  Oof.. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings)
World Background is good, futuristic world with advance gaming technology...Seems. great.


GOOD WORK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP.
*THUMBS UP*

Simply too bad!
One cliché behind the other ..
Slap in the face? What a joke!
Where is the content of this?
Lose of total time!
There's nothing clever about this garbage!

I have to say that i didn't ecept this novel to be this good , this novel had beaten me into submission , forcing me to give this review and to add it into my library

If you're looking for something cliché, slap the bastard's face! So this is your beach ... Good luck!
I only sincerely hope you do not regret it later like me!

I'm following up and from what I've seen so far, it's a very generic theme with the same things that every cliche novel has ... When we say cliché it's not in the bad sense, it's simply that something new is missing, something that sets a novel apart from other. I think I've had enough of all these novels to tell the truth.
Sigh...

I'm done with it. Beginning to be repetitive and without new ideas.
I just regretted wasting my time reading this!
Anyway, good luck and do not get discouraged with my insignificant comment, only each one has its own taste.

It true later on it is a little different,but point is you just took different idea from different novels and made it a little better. I prefer some more original ideas. No matter how you wrap something more beautifully,it is still the same item. Plus this character design is nothing new. Plenty of them out there that are similar like him. For me it is just too edgy and cliche.

Really interesting! Supporting my buddies excellent new work! It may be just for fun - because it is a really fun read! Now to overcome the barrier called 140 words minimum. Here's a story.

It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors.
"Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside.
(Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror.
It wasn't raining.
It was...
Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.

I say, story is very good but, is the book being dropped or something?? Its already a few months now and there's no updates.