Legend of the Arc Magus. From Vol. 12 - Reviews

Somewhat Disappointing, it has a fantastic beginning and really kick ass MC... for the first few chapters, after that the characters become increasingly 2d, and disposable, a great deal of face slapping and MC pride mongering ensues, there are some funny moments and a couple slightly thought provoking ones...but it leaves you with the feeling of bait and switch, which is really frustrating and makes you feel robbed. Don't get me wrong, its not a bad story, but it feels like a scifi with all the tropes of a wuxia novel, So much potential in this story feels like it has been wasted, and a lot of it feels like it is first sucked out of the authors thumb, and then given shallow justifications as to why and how it is happening.

This novel is pretty funny and has an actually interesting MC and supporting characters definitely worth the read.                                

it's full of Bullsh it and very inconsistent throughouteither the writer is dumbsht or thinks readers have way below average IQ and have zero reasoning thou the cheat was quite good but never used in the way the it's name suggests

This is one of the few books that the tag smart MC actually applies to the MC exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expexpexpexpexpexp

This is one my favorite novels it is a hidden gem I am surprised it is not very popular I think there needs to be a lot more people to read it It has not that much of the bad wuxia, xinian, and xuahuan cliches and the ones it does it has a new take on them that is addictive (not saying some of the bad cliches are bad in my opinions) I hope the author makes this a 1000+ chapters , does not drop this, adds multiple realms, makes this a harem, and adds kingdom building elements

REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?ADVICENone, the author was a better writer than me...... Kudos!

All of the chakra was directed towards her son's eyes in order to keep the Sharingan active.

"Sigh. She really is a kid" thought Ariel "full of questions".

He hurriedly stuffed the items in his bags, his eyes frantically darting all sorts of directions in case someone had seen him. He knew he had to constantly be discreet, his motions cautious as anyone would jump at someone who had even the smallest essence of survival. Yet to his surprise, no one followed behind. Usually, a couple of men who had been roaming in the streets would try to get something out of you, if you managed to find something as close to food.

Darker..

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She was not planning on leaving her consort. It was Shen Ya herself that voiced out her opinion without focusing on her words.