Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for me
The protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord
His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time)
However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition)
Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensate
Plot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at times
Worst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapter
Overall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite
