Last Starborn - Reviews

I do not recommend this book. The premise of the story is a good one however other than the lead character none of the other characters are fully developed.

Pretty good read so far. Enjoyable and fun. It is still very early for a full review, but I have to say that it's looking really good so far. Well done author!

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"You fell in love with a stupid pancake?"

"Hurry up and give me the contact information, I'm really getting annoyed with your constant dodging."

They couldn't take the sidewalk the cuts across the field since the zombie was close to it. Best not to risk it.

Her heart beats furiously at the thought of him, and he is also the reason why she dreaded this wedding the most.

inertia has much potential. it feels like bits and pieces of other novels have been blended together  to make a completely new story. I came from the tiktoks, and am staying for the development.

I see great prospect in this novel but, I hope you put " " during conversation and ' ' during the mind conversation to identify which is talking with mouth and talking in mind.The other novel is good too, just maybe, put this [ ] when system is issuing task, achievements, and promts. So that the paragraphs are more organized and make it easy to read.