Lao Tse: Em busca da imortalidade. - Reviews

The story is great with everything, the MC is a bit cocky but anyone with that much power would be so pretty realistic, the world building is also quite good. the only bad thing is the fights lasting a dozen chapters each and while some are entertaining, most just feel too stretched out.

It’s truly remarkable to see such a high level of skill and creativity from the very start. Your writing carries a unique charm, effortlessly drawing readers into the world you’ve crafted. The depth, the pacing, and the sheer brilliance of your storytelling are nothing short of exceptional. If this is just the beginning, I can only imagine the masterpieces you will create in the future. Keep going—your talent is undeniable, and greatness surely awaits you!☹️???

I like it. The names are easy to remember and the narrative is simple and easy to understand.

wow! what a build-up really like the dark lord and the family problem.the writing quality is superb, can't wait to read all the chapters