Lao Tse: Em busca da imortalidade. - Reviews

                                            "ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" shouted Shin Feng as his will crumbled the platform. The old man smiled and dissipated. The platform was within reach of his head. He tipped his head over and touch the end of it. He then regained his limbs and got transported to a white room.

Though both can't see each other, Bertolt and Laura sighed in relief.

"Human Dids do good."

"Umm, okay." Leo finally consented, putting his hand upon the stone. The park was only now filling up with people. When the people saw that a kid was already awakening, many were outraged, "Why does he go first?" Yelled a noble, "My son was supposed to go first! We agreed to that right?"

MIA

My name is Duoduo Zheng. In our language, the pronunciation makes the name an extra meaning - earn more money. My parents said they gave me this name because "Duoduo" means "lots of, more and extra". They hope me grow up with lots of luck, happiness, health, wealth and of course love.

"No excuses Nate," Mr. Lacowasi said, cutting me off. "Just take the assignment, and get notes on whatever you've missed from a classmate. I need to move with the lesson."

( Dhubbb…!!!)

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

It would be always hard to lose a dear someone. Grief would never go away. We just have to learn how to live with it.A good story with a great plot. The author just needs to pay attention to the sentence structures. Sometimes there are very long paragraphs that should be divided into a few. It helps the readers to read smoothly

This is a Good Story with potential to be among the top fantasy ones. I have to say that originally i came to just test some chapters but now I am hooked . Waiting for the next chapters ......And his ability to mimic .... can't he copy the skills of the so-called divine one who reincarnated him?.Looking forward to new chapters . I hope you will succeed in your writing .

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