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I had readed other Mafia's books, but this one is the Best, there are many twists and integrate, that always you have to continue reading. Excellent work author.
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Complete garbage I wouldn't recommend to anyone. The plot progresses like the writer wrote this in an examination room and just adds whatever idea that pops up in his head. The character development sucks I have yet to get a clear image of any of main characters. Certain actions /events don't connect well with the entire plot line either that or the author just forgot about that all together. All in all one star is being super generous. Don't waste your time
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Good novel but I disagree with the fact this isn't a fan fiction, much of the lineage here is only from Vikings and in reality all of Ragnar's sons that are notable (aside from a passing mention) come from his 2nd and third wife (Ragnar met lagertha when he went to avenge his grandfather and she was key to his victory)
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This story has a loot of potential the only thing is the story has a very slow update speed. PS NNNNNNNNNNNNeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEd more
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This is a very intriguing story and a page turner. There's no way you would want to start and not see the end of it. Apart from a few present and past tense mistakes, the writing quality is super great. The story idea and development is worth more than the five star I gave it. I love the character of Santos (that lucky bastard)??. Author did a great job on this one. well done???????
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please make more ??????????????................
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I'd have given a 5 star review but the author has not updated for over 2 months and I really want some more ????????????????
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another wish fulfilment novel where everything is given to the MC, and the author conveniently make the MC drink aphrodisiacs poison AND make it unremovable even with his Op-ness, just to allow him to **** someone else that is drugged.
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Do you know how confident I am in my writing for a somewhat fan-fic? Mad confident. Like even if my writing was a level lower, it would still be much better than more than half of the original works/fan-fictions.Stability? Pffft. If I can't think of something original, there is always that cliche plot which most people seem to find as a guilty pleasure, so you'll be fine!Story development? Lol please, read the first chapter and tell me do you get the usual flashback of the "I met God by dying on the way home by truck-kun and yadadada," no. ?STRAIGHT?TO?THE?POINT?Character Design! Mindless Harem? Ew, I'd rather go watch some hentai or something. But I love the arrogant young master cliche though, let's be real here, face-smacking is gold.World Background. Let me tell you this, ?CULTIVATION?NOVEL?Yeah, you already know there will be multiple worlds and I promise you, I will do my serious best to make it seem realistic, fantasy-wise of course, so you can picture things better.
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I want to bring it to your attention that You haven't touched the emotional part of the story at all. Just train and train more. He has friends, he can laugh and talk merrily. So why is he so cold to his teammates'(uchiha) impending doom? Or not even doing anything in that regard.Forget about doing anything, Author, you haven't written anything on the emotional part here.. like feeling sad? feeling anxious? lost? What? nothing here.It just feels like a guy with autistic wrote a lame book. I hope you correct that.Everything else is good.
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Arthur look at the list and found out that one of those books were the book he borrowed last semester and another book on The Bermuda triangle timelines. He looked for it and started reading until it's time to meet his sister and Akira.
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I reached out to grab the packet of candles but someone called out for me. I tilted my head to the right and realised that it was Adrian.

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