King of Maguscraft - Reviews

pretty good but where are the mc skills like we see a high a class skill book drop for a class which doesn't very good skill books and up to where I left around chapter 20 everyone in his party had like 2. class skills and he had 2 d class skills this dose not make sense as both shamed and hunters appeared to be common

Entre todo esta buenom sigan con el buen trabajo........................................ ................................................................

It was good at first but it became total boring after that I don't know but when there is no circumstances in the story, it should at list be a funny story. I don't know... its just my oun perspective

Honored to be part of the proofreading team lol youre gonna do great.book seems pretty decent so far, cant wait for more insights into the cultivation system. Also mei ling seems like a nice love interest

Yumina winced.

"You punk, do you think i want this, it's because you are my disciple i have to take part in academy three man team, besides you know right; konoha strength lies in its number and the ability to work together with that number" (think of this way you are playing Basketball against Lebron James he is going to trash you, but if you play 5 vs 1 you can beat him, heck with good team chemistry you will trash him; there is strength in number and team chemistry increase that strength)

Bukan nya bagus ... kan setiap karakter punya prinsip nya sendiri

Doing as she said, he was quickly bombarded by Shuri's voice, "This is Quartermaster, do you read me?"

{Are you interested on dating anyone?}

niceeeeeee work . keep up the good work.

         Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

This is a well-written story overall, though it starts with some cliché elements. The character abilities have creative names, but I don't quite like how their powers don't match with the names. After merging the spirit eyes, it feels like his status downgraded with only fancy names added . The story has only recently started, but it's moderately enjoyable so far.