Great story, with character development and quite interesting plot. Although it really REALLY need a characters index and a glossary with the general information of the world, the different ranks of artifacts, cultivation, etc.
writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ some words are missing in most of the paragraphs but it's not a big problem.story development ⭐⭐⭐⭐4 stars because you failed to discribe some of the scenes which caused me to have a hard time imagining things but over all it's goodcharacter design ⭐⭐⭐ all the characters are good except the female characters ?
{fifth an RPG like system to show my skills stats and overall progress with the ability to let me travel to other universes when I get to a certain threshold}
