my honest opinion i got to say the plot was good until up to part where you really dumb down the mc and cause the major issue to your plot and you know what I am talking about. please don't do that again just to add drama because you will garbage you novel even more. you put all these warnings just to be wasted because you made the mc 0 iq because the power of family. I just wanna say please improve your plot without the unnecessary stuff and I will improve the rating. I got a lot to say, but I am just going to say dont destroy your novel unless your rewrite your mess.