Jordan's Diary - Reviews

This novel is a real gem ?. In this dystopian modern world, countries war with none mass destruction weapons. The protagonist Alex has grown up on the battlefield to be an S rank mercenary. Due to his father’s injury Alex retires with him to civilian life. The story revolves around Alex’s climatization to high school life and the drama ? of being a teenager. That “drama” includes plenty of combat and action in and out of school, for Alex and the “Mercenary Club” they form.

#who knows the the mtl or raw link?where's the next chap!!!???? !?!;!!&-(£+&#(-£+(  @webnovel what happened to the next chapter, huh!?...

Though the disciple trope is good, most of them have male protagonists that only accept woman disciplesFor example, if the protagonist were to choose between a man with peerless talent and background vs a maid with a divine bone or whatever and no background,He’d isntantly choose the maid

Reading through the lastest chapter (511) Everything is good except the repettitive sentence or paragraph At first in the early chapter which i didnt remember the exact chapter, it has a one or two repetitive sentenceI do not mind it since everyone can make some minor mistake But later the mistake keep growing until the chapter 507The repettive in this chapter reach to the point that i cant take any of this anymoreThe content in chapter 507 is nothing except it copy every sentence from chapter 506 and paste it on chapter 507, Everything is the sameAlso the lastest chapter for now (511) has the same mistake as other chapter but not much as chapter 507Some people already told me that they had infrom cutomer service about this but i see no progress about this at allThis author is completely a gold digger as the chapter in this novel is very expensive from a massive word count from repetitive sentenceSo i recommend this book but DO NOT spend your money on thisIT IS NOT WORTHps. Sorry for bad english

Hmmm... its rated at 3.92, lemme put it back to 3.8 where it belongs. Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash!

Definite 5 stars, I knew I struggled and still am with writing, but for your first time, it blew me away. Crisp and direct, which is a major downfall of mine, I find this utterly fascinating to read. Spot in my library for sure ! MC shows character in every nuance of his actions, and I find it appealing to spectate him.Storyline may seem cliche, but to future readers, do not try to skip over it without reading first. It is a polished gem.World background was given, which is plenty for now. Reminds me slightly of King’s Avatar tho.All in all, infatuated and doubly impressed ! Kudos to you author, and I hope you continue writing with fervor !

The Bai Clan members looked at Bai Heng like he had gone crazy while the Representative made a face like he was going to burst into tears.

Thank you for the not to boring chapter.  :)  Got to have a foundation.  start the power up!

    Sapa bibi penjaga kantin yang baru menyadari lirikkan gelisah dari Je Ah dan Yongsup untuknya. Ia diam sejenak mengamati mulut Je Ah dan Yongsup yang mulai meracau tanpa suara, tentu kepadanya.

"You don't have to do this. You are the visitor here." Mahinang sambit ng dalaga sa binata. Sasagot sana ang binata nang magsalita mula sa kanilang likuran si Jenica.

Ken: "Oh, are there gods here?"

3. You are able to get new skills later and after your transfer, status shown later will mostly stated as an innate talents. Some skills come with extra benefit like a personal guide, who also not allowed to be abused as well.