Jinchuriki Unite - Reviews

One of the best book author... Love it.

REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me..... kudos!

I have read till chapter 22 and till now its really entertaining.  really good story ?.  plz don't drop it.

Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !!Author please continue  .. ... ...

Overall it’s a fine story. The main issues are that all the girls surrounding the main character cry whenever something happens. Its used way to much to be normal. It would also be nice if the author had an auxiliary chapter or something similar that explains the different cultivation stages and gives some world background. There are also a few grammer and spelling errors, but it isnt too bad.

I see music, I vote. Synopsis is pretty confusing but ehhh it's music!! That's definitely a great reason for you to vote for a novel. I have high hopes for you, young man. (or novel?? lol)

Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.

Hi I am on the road right away so I’m sorry to bother but I just got off work so I’m going on the road to go get a quick stop stop bye hi hi hello bye hi hi bye hello bye hi hi hello hi bye hello bye hi bye hello hello

I intend to rewrite this into original version, well mainly it's a bother to write based on something that I'm not fully love

He ended the call by saying goodbye and hugged me carefully.

"I'll do that."

"I'm fine, m-mother," she said, stumbling at the last word. It feels foreign in her tongue, both as Mingmei and Lian. As Mingmei, she'd never had someone to call mother, despite treating the Empress as the mother she never had, and as Lian, it did not seem like a familiar way to address her honorable mother.