Jōki:The Forsaken Gift - Reviews

The mc is too linear. They made him stingy and that is his only defining trait, after 150 chp he still has no character development, and is just a douche. He doesn’t value any relationship at all and treats his own companions and people in general horribly. 150+ chapters and little story not world development. No idea on the hierarchy structure/world background and nothing on cultivation ranks.

The author has a real hard-on for violating the fourth wall like the MC violates his women. But that's okay, because the whole book is born of fourth-wall-breaking author's notes from another book. Paranoid is funny, the lemon is appropriately sour, and he updates steadily.

The book is so amaizing everything about it is well structured.I've only read 9 chapters but i'm already so absorbed in it .keep up the good work

Nice story so far (Chapter 8 and ongoing). The only thing is minor mistakes and you seriously need an AUX chapter for these characters lol.

Don't let the low chapter count fool you, each chapter though short has more story than 5-10 normal chapters. This story might give you whiplash from how quickly it develops. So 80 chapters actually equals 800 of another novel. Other than a problem with pacing the story is epic and full of imagination.Hold on to your hat, because mine blew away!!

Amazing already love it im currently reading the other book this Author wrote and love it so i know The future chapters will be amazing to ?

Author is allowed to shamelessly inflate his own ego since there are bots that hate creativity on this site. Also I think it's a good story and I'm working hard on it? Yes I am

Years went by and Training had made them masters in the use of their powers, with daily spars and advice from century-old nobles and a scientist without peer it was a given, even the Noblesse had practised the use of his blood fruit to the point that he can use it unconsciously like another limb.

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It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

"Anyway Gabriel I have a question" Issei said continuing on

nice book i highly recommend it. if you find it, pls add it to your library