It's the second night - Reviews

After reading the first volume of this novel we can very easily come to the conclusion that this at best a filler novel.Translation Quality - good enough, nothing superb - 4 stars.Stability of Updates - 14 chapters of about 7-8 ss a week - 4 stars.Story Development - Most of the chapters are just filler. For eg. in one chapter, its only about the MC riding on his monster to examination venue through a forest, the authority keeping an eye on these examinees and one very trivial/short comedy segment. Are 7 ss worth this? Next, the monster trainer/master does very little in a fight (doesn't have the ability to fight nor does he actively command his monsters) - 2 stars.Character Design - Very little characters other than the MC have an important role, and even those that can be considered important side characters are developed enough. MC himself is a brat, mediocre at best. He is not funny enough, nor smart nor serious. I feel the characters are seriously lacking or rather the author has been really lazy in writing them. - 2 stars.World Backgroud - Nothing new, very similar to Monster Paradise and other tropes. - 3 stars.All in all, very disappointing read for its current rating of 4.4. Excluding Translation quality and Stability of Updates (which is a solid 4 stars), this novel is utter trash. Only 2.3 stars.Monster Paradise is just so much better than this in so many places and levels, and that is after the fact that Monster Paradise isn't that great itself.

I picked this novel up today and read it right through! I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys sensual scenes, humour, and driven plot.Reading this novel was a pleasure, with very few grammar and plot problems, and an active author, one can really feel the authors dedication to the development and quality of their story.10 out of 5 stars!

I actually love this book everything about it is great except the translation quality which became poor after some time

this is good and very well written.........................................................................................................

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it was enjoyable in the beginning but as i read on it got to descriptive and the time it spent describing things it could have been in a fight scene.

It is just a little too much with mentioning of no spiritual roots, we get it he has no spiritual roots just stop it, really annoying. other than that it's all good

Hehehehehehehehehhehehe any romance in this one?                                                                                          

If you’re tried of the series with plots that don’t seem all that thought out then this ones for you.this dude also put actual thought the world.our mc is also not without flaws( thats a good thing) and struggles with thing and can get messed up by others I find in these kingdoms building novel that it all seems to be rushedWell maybe one stupid moment but then again maybe it was to show a character flaw (SPOILERS) about how little he actually cares for the normal soldiers or the boyz under him as when facing a easy choice to retreat his comaber instead chooses to keep fighting losing more than half his men instead of punishing him he says well now you know not to carelessly kill all your men and not to do it again

The story is very engaging and the quality of writing is also good. The story progression is also good. Keep on writing and keep providing quality contests. I support you Author. I want more chapter.