It's my fate, I finally found you - Reviews

Copy of "picking up attributes from today" Same system, same cliches, different setting. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  ..  . . ..

Hmm where should I start?? First of all for those who like legendary mechanic this novel has the same characteristics with different world background. The start of story is rather confusing and not interesting enough for me. The story has a slow pace that you will find the chapter mostly talked about his daily story, well a lot of preparation thing before the player (Beta) start appearing at chapter around 20 I think. To be honest the story itself was actually good and has a good potential (I don't read the raw, it's based on this trial read) but the one that will turned you off will be the translation. A lot of sentence in the novel don't made sense, it the way that it was missing a lot of information that affected the detail of the story.Well I'll end it here, I'll edit it later after reading all 40 Chapter.

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After I login to my computer, a message appears on the screen:

The only way to change his fate was to enlist. Rome was simple if one had talent in battle they would rise. Those that were high enough could possibly gain anything. Woman, wealth if you just delivered good results. You could have it. With his skinny body were his bones could be seen piercing through the boy walked. His blond hair and blue eyes would make him a handsome kid. If only he had been fed well. A soldier was sitting on a chair writing something down.

I felt his tip against my part and…

He wore his black suit, red tie, and neat hair. He looked at the watch and asked her, "Babe, you are calling me?" He said with his impatient tone. He felt irritated inside due to his meeting been interupted.

"How could you?"

"Hmm..."

" My sis is right" said my brother.

"Sorry..." I whisper and I cover my mouth

I liked the sample now give me MORE!.A lovely book really,keep up the good work author