I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.