Is it wrong to want to be a hero in the dark age - Reviews

I just read about 5 of your chapters and I have to say it's the most horribly cringe worthy work ever. Be it the MC or the ground work of your story or the content delivery which is like drivel of mistakes written by a 6 year old.......... Please improve.

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Freeman............... please don't drop this, the start is good though...slow start with knowledge of future.and every technology, ninjutsu, magic, and every thing out there with instant mastery

Genre is Paranormal. Have yet to touch on the romance bit but author says there is one.Anyway, this is a novel that takes a lot of getting used to. English isn't my first language, and I suspect it isn't Author's one as well. It's not the grammatical errors that get to me but rather, it's the way that the Author phrases things.The structure of the sentences takes a lot of getting used to, and one would need to decipher what is truly being said. I guess that gives it the more 'paranormal' bit more paranormal. /hehI find the characters extremely likeable and I love the way the story unfolds as to his development. The pace is very slow and full of 'you will know later' which, quite frankly, is quite irritating after a while. I wonder why the MC hasn't freaked out yet each time someone says it to him. He's a much better and stronger person than I'll ever be - and I'm talking about character wise, not physical strength. I mean, come one. He's in the middle of the greatest plot EVER and no one tells him anything yet he doesn't throw a tantrum. Whoa.Anyway, I do love the story and what twists and turns it holds. If you have the patience to adapt to the Author's writing style, you won't be disappointed in reading on. It gets much better (storywise and plot) as you read more chapters.All the best, Author!

Guys what happened why isn't author-san not updating anymore??!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!????????????????????????????????????????!???????????????????????????????????????

I only read it till chapter 40 because it became boring.................................................................I read this is qidian...

There is only 8 chapters so far. But you get quite some action from Asura, the ruthless unbound protagonist. There is a lot of face-slapping and looming schemes. There are mages AND martial artists in this world? Is this an Eastern-Western fusion? I am definitely excited for the world to gradually unveil. The formatting is not perfect. But hey, it doesn't affect the read that much. Solid story. Keep up the good work!

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"Hey!"(you'll see this word alot in this story.. so far as i've read.) It's like a bunch of mmo stories came together to donate some seed and made a baby.. which is this story. ^^' some ppl might enjoy this that might not have read alot of mmo stories before? hard to say, gl to author

Honestly, a great story. The characters are well developed, the wording is impeccable, the story is engaging, and I can't wait for more! :D

Stopped here just to make a review, chapter 39 really got me, the story was slow paced with some confusing chapters, but the slow pacing as the key to this emotions I'm feeling right now for the Andrei

As a fan of many authors, and with the respect I have for those who work hard to make their novels readable, I say now that this novel is very unreadable, the author hasn’t bothered to understand how to use the English language properly when writing. Errors everywhere. For those of you who keep up with this l.n. Props to you, you’re seriously a different breed. But for the author I say, read English literature, don’t stick to reading light novels all the time, because in the long run you won’t improve your English writing if you don’t have a solid grasp on the writing technique. Also read English dictionaries. And do free English lessons using an app or the internet. I can tell you’re young so you have a lot of potential. This novel is truly just your start and I hope your writing technique on your next ones will be so good they can’t even be compared to this one. Alright that’s all I wanted to say. And as a brother this novel is trash get better at writing in English bro.?