Iris was Iris, Rosa is Rosa. Wait, is this a fantasy game? - Reviews

the synopsis that is supposed to tell us about the story says nothing at all...fillers: "why does the burger have less energy than the steak? the burger is in its ground state."

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I like this story a lot.Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.

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How do you go from an amazing novel to absolute trash in one chapter.  thats it one chapter was all it took to kill this book everything after that chapter is trash.

Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine

I like it that the MC so cute and hilarious to the point he became ooc. Hahaha Looking forward to the back ground story of MC and his favourite disciple. Hence Plot holes for a reason? Awaiting next chapter update

It's good to read when your bored or to kill the time! But I think it's fine in my point of view for me cuz it's not my type of novel to read but It was recommended

An unspeakable sorrow filled my heart as I gazed upon the woman, she was my mom.

"Berhentilah membuatku khawatir." ujarnya lembut, menatapku lekat.

Walking over to him I took a pokeball out and threw it. Waiting for the three ticks I picked up the pokeball and made my way back to vespiqueen.

When will you update