Into the Zombie World - Reviews

I actually bypassed this before as I thought it will be a book where people simply try to survive a zombie apocalypse. Having had the chance to read it now made me realize that this actually is a gem. I was surprised when the author used terms from our local dialect. It is refreshing! I can also relate to the humor the author used as these are common in our country (sabihin mo salamat shafefe

Well, I just wrote a super ass long review and I am not ready or willing to write another one, sorry author, maybe next time!
Short, it isn't good but also not that bad. I dropped it already, so there's that.
It is interesting but far too babysitter kind for me.
For me, a good Zombie Novel is a badass solo dude who maybe finds a badass sexy companion who together with the Mc slays monster and zombies and maybe discover the reason behind the Zombie Apocalypse.

This Story is a beta version for me and a Story for Simps, sorry again to the author.
Not the type of story I would read but every person has a different taste, so my simp friends, go get it.

This story was rather rickety to begin with. It is random and filled with ham-handed Information Dumps. The Protagonist is an Idiot. I tried hard to hang in there despite the roughness of the story, because at the end of the day, I just like Zombie Stories. It was kinda weird when the protagonist got orgasmic feelings from probing Zombie brains with his finger…EE…The breaking point was when the Protagonist DIDN'T WANT to look muscular and buff. I get more tired of this Fetish against manly physiques in these stories EVERY TIME I ENCOUNTER IT. Damned Nation! You can't argue that someone like Bolo Yeung is slow and awkward—or grotesque. I guess having a manly physique ruins one's cross-dressing.

Please Guys.

Don't review this novel without reading at all.

Saying something like,

I love your novel blah blah. You have a good plot blah blah blah. And then posting your novel's link at the end of the review asking for a review as well.

That's not a review at all. That's promoting.

Please, guys, there is a forum to promote your novel.

My novel is not the forum.

I know I'm not a good author, but I just don't want to shoo away potential readers just because of your false and flowery review.

Again, it's bad for my novel. And I don't think you would love something like that to happen to you, as well.

I would immediately delete review like that so don't bother at all, you'll just waste your time.

Thanks.

Fellow Pinoy here! Anyway, I've only read a few chapters, but here's my review on it.

Things to improve:

First off, there is an obvious approach to action and since it's a zombie novel, it is a must to have action-filled chapters. However, although the author does try to execute this, it can fall flat. Maybe it's because there's not much the readers know about Nile himself, or what even drives him. If it is simply for survival, then the narratives and descriptive words should be improved on more to elicit the right emotions.

Good points:

The author knows where the story is supposed to go, and Nile's actions are logical. It's also interesting to know there are "interesting zombies", which might be a turning point for the story.

To conclude, it's a good story with an easy-to-read format. It can be a good zombie novel and holds potential.

It was an okay read.

But its kinda below average for a zombie novel. There is no sense of tension or fear when reading this and instead of putting up a frightening scene or atmosphere, the author decided to push some info dumps in your throat. It was okay if the info dumps was original but the it was the big baddie government and the failed experiment virus.

When setting up a zombie novel the author should have put some tension like show the victims its impact to the world and stuff. They were only mentioned but it relied on just telling aspect which was kinda underwhelming in my opinion.

Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.

"Into the Zombie World" is a captivating and thought-provoking novel that takes readers on an immersive journey into a post-apocalyptic realm where humans coexist with undead creatures. The story weaves a complex tapestry of survival, morality, and the resilience of the human spirit.

At its core, the novel challenges our perceptions of humanity and the capacity for empathy even in the face of unimaginable horror. It explores themes of friendship, sacrifice, and the struggle to maintain one's humanity amidst chaos. The author deftly portrays the evolution of characters as they grapple with their own fears and the ethical dilemmas posed by their new reality.

The narrative is not just about gore and violence, but rather a meditation on the depths of human connection and the power of hope. Through the characters' interactions, we witness the rise of unexpected alliances and the importance of finding meaning in a world turned upside down.

"Into the Zombie World" also delves into the psychological impact of living with the constant threat of annihilation, highlighting the psychological warfare that takes place within the mind. It invites readers to ponder the boundaries between life and death, and what it truly means to be alive.

In conclusion, this novel is a compelling blend of action, suspense, and profound philosophical inquiry, leaving readers pondering long after the last page. It serves as a reminder that even in the darkest of times, the indomitable human spirit can find strength and purpose in the most unexpected places.

Having ventured into "Into the Zombie World," I found myself engrossed in a thrilling narrative that blended post-apocalyptic chaos with unexpected human connections. The author's vivid descriptions brought the undead realm to life, keeping me on the edge of my seat with every chapter. The protagonist's resilience and resourcefulness were commendable, making me root for their survival. Although the setting was dark, there was a subtle undercurrent of hope that resonated deeply. Overall, it's a captivating read that explores the depths of humanity amidst adversity.

Caution!

I've made a mistake and there is a lot of info dump in the early chapters. Although I cannot guarantee it, I am doing my best not to repeat this in the future.

This story revolves on the Main Character Nile who transmigrated in the world full of zombie. I will focus on him and his development.

As a newbie author, I know I will make a lot mistakes during this journey. I apologize in advance for that.

I am open for critics(no harsh words please), that way I know where I am lacking and what should I improve more.

If you have any suggestions and tips to improve my writing, please do tell me about it.

Into the Zombie World is a book of fiction written by Neil_Ads. The story revolves around  a man named Nile who sought to survive a zombie apocalypse after his untimely death by being bumped by a truck.

The author uses present-tense. Well, it is a good story. Personally, what I love about the book is Nile's intelligence and the way he reacts to certain things. He thinks logically, making the right choice except for the store as he could've looted the first three houses instead of choosing the store.

I love his plans and schemes to get rid off or defeat zombies. I think there is a mixture of futuristic technology since there is this so called system that displays certain things. I'm not used to reading these kind of novel mixtures.

Anyway, the grammar and punctuation is definitely one thing the author must improve. Yes, it uses present-tense but because of this, it seems more like a guy telling actions rather than a describing and story-telling. He is walking, He is going, he is banging, things like that should be changed.

Because of this, it lacks emotions and some elements of a horror novel. You could describe the zombies more rather than using Big, small, fat, or sharp teeth. I didn't feel any suspense except for the parts in which the dialogues weren't aplenty.

I would like to suggest that you describe things like this:

Example:
His leg were trembling.

Try going to the next level:
His legs were noodles.

Or to add more suspense and frightening elements, I would suggest:
Example:
The silence shrouded his mind. (Lacks emotions)

"Once the quietness arrived, it stayed and spread in Estha. It reached out of his head and enfolded him in its swampy arms…sent its stealthy, suckered tentacles inching along the insides of his skull, hoovering the knolls and dells of his memory, dislodging old sentences, whisking them off the tip of his tongue."

Something like that. Well, I hope this honest criticism helped out!

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