INTERTWINED FATES - Reviews

i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying .the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks

This the typical cliche reincarnation back in time. I've finished the whole story and it's not bad at all, on the contrary I loved reading it. Also include typical Chinese over the top annoying propaganda of we are always right, typical harem. On the bright it have these . 5 chapters which have very spicy stuffs but not much. You'll love it or hate it.

I gave 5 stars... Not because I've read the story... No... Grandpa gave five stars because I trust the previous review's comment and I believe he was an honest person... Anyway... Good job!

good book to read without any regret and can go on further

Adrian grinned and leaned realy close to her, then wispered "I'll tell you on the roof after class".

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"Can I go with him?" Julia asked.

It was time to completely remove the decaying worms from his body! The small amount of internal energy he had cultivated and the body condition he had reached were all essential for his plan.

When my eyes were fully open, I saw Sudo .

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed