Umm, I didn't read this story, but I read the synopsis, and I am so confused. Extremely confused. What was that? I just don't even know what to say, what is happening there? Everything is in one format and I don't know when the scene changes or what happens. It doesn't make me want to read the story, but it does leave me confused. You probably have an actually good story and good luck and good morning. And just in case we don't meet, good afternoon, good evening, and goodnight.