Instructing the wayward woman - Reviews

Excellent book. Well written. I loved all the characters

Wow love love love

This is the first novel or it might be the only novel that has my taste on. I actually have a lot of novel I like(not exactly many)but this is the only i have my taste on, because all the things I have on my mind also have in this novel.(I dont even know if that make sense XD). But all in all very noice nice workkkk.

Hello, shameless review from the Author. I can't give myself full marks as my english is far from perfect. However, i hope you will be able to enjoy this story despite its shortcomings.Here are a few more informations about this novel.I read many webnovels, from eastern/ western fantasy, to apocalypse stories, with System and Video-games sub-genre from time to time. After reading so much, i have developed a vision quite precise of what i'm seeking for in a story.The start of this story is slow, with maybe too many info blocks in the first few chapters, but it will only improve after.Survival, System and Apocalypse are the dominant themes. However, you will find at some point similarities (but very different in the facts) with other webnovels like Devil's Cage, Terror infinity and Ultimate evolution. The difference is that it will only be one aspect of the story.There is one central Romance, no Harem. There will potentially be several love interests in the story, but as in real life we meet people and things happen or not. As a Survival story, there is a Game of Throne/ Walking Dead feel that can't be avoided. Not everyone can survive but the deaths are not distributed like candies either.At last, i attach a lot of importance to coherence. If you notice any incoherences, don't hesitate to point it out. It will be quickly fixed.

Hello I am really very impressed by your writing. Like I read the few chapters. I also looked and I guess this is your first novel but it's so good. You have written so nicely. The character, the plot every thing is so good.

Well, at least I won't have to worry about nonsensical hook up with women with sudden inexplicable obsession with the MC. One thing I have to comment is that the author dragged in several real life people in the novel. This is not a fan fiction but a novel that's expected to be published (at least online), has the author asked for permission?

This book is awesome because it is easy to understand the storyline and this book is a adventure and cultivation Story with Yi Yun and his Friend.

1star cause its harem. only ugly men whos a virgin will like this. their life is so pitiful that seek harem novel to imagine theirselves as the protagonist.

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Totally my style!There aren't that many original novels that include entertainment and a system like yours and mine.I've got to say, it's very interesting.It kinda makes me want to start publishing again..Keep up the good work!

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The beginning is great until I look at all the chapter titles,description, and what I have read so far and realize there is no merchant actions that would consider him being a merchant, He doesn't sell stuff  that would be considered a merchant, All I see is Sex and more *** then cultivation nothing to relate to the Title of the story.