Infinite: The Fracture / Preview Chapters - Reviews

I love this story. The author is very interesting to read, with a very funny style of writing inner dialogue! ?The only problem is that there's only 3 chapters, and it seems unlikely to update soon. ?

Bae Seoyeon could only accept her fate and started moving the boxes.

MISUK: No, APPA already have someone else inside his heart

"Ani. Pipiku memang seperti ini." sahutku yang sudah salah tingkah. Memilih menunduk menghindari tatapannya. Ia kembali diam. Lama menunggunya, aku kembali menatapnya. Ternyata ia masih menatapku. Kurasakan desir panas yang mengalir dari tatapan itu. Sejenak, aku terhanyut pada tatapannya. Kami terdiam dalam beberapa detik menikmati sensasi menggetarkan itu. Masih saling menatap. Saling melepas rindu. Setelah 5 tahun lamanya berpisah.

Opening my eyes I sat up, looking around my empty, dull cell. It was the same everyday and I hated it more with every passing hour. Though this morning there was something different about my cell. There was a white envelope under the door. So out of sheer curiosity, I picked it up. Inside was a letter written in black ink. The writing was beautiful and artistic. I swallowed then started reading the letter.

"Though at worst I'd have no choice but to break the lock and ask a vendor-san for another, does Onee-chan know of a better way?"

"The war between these two factions became more and more prolonged until the Outlaws began to see their shortage of people and decided to withdraw from the fight and leave the city, if that was possible, on the other hand the victorious, took the weapons, food and other objects that the other side possessed, the destroyed streets of the city now possessed thousands of corpses, reminders of the war, which had passed shortly after the nuclear fire." (Storyteller)

"Enough! take him away" God snapped his fingers and two angels appeared out of nowhere  and grasped both of Chrodeas hands.

I said yep what a concept

Spoiler alert.Most argue the story has a slow development place. I think it needs to be that way in order for this story to have over 2000 chapters. I read 100 chapters. So far it has felt like it has been a solo journey. Just grind get money, get more evolution points, evolve, find stronger opponent, level up. I want more, maybe more romance maybe in the future his undead army will be able to have family of their owns. Maybe his undead will be able to rule lands of their owns. I want more and I think I wont get it until the academy arc starts.One thing I dislike was around chapter 90-100 when he discovered the black tentancles after killing the gargoyles is the fact he was revelead as a chose one. I felt like its an important title and was shown way to early. Give us hints, indirect wording. We were revealed to that word but as readers we truly dont know how important that is in the context of this story. show me HOW GREAT OF THAT TITLE MEANS. SHOW ME HOW RARE IT IS, HOW POWERFUL, should my heart stop when I see that word, should my blood run in reverse? In the future tell me how his enemies feels. I want my feelings evoked. We will see how the story plays out.Overall 8/10. maybe add like romance,sex scenes, like give this MC some reason to live,  give him some real pleasure outside of grinding day in and out. Maybe MC wil have a undead queen from a different planet. Tell me how the other characters feel about him.  I completely understand he is in a rush to get rank 2 but please I hope it doesnt continue like this later in the chapters. The envy,jealousey,hate,disdain,lust,respect I want to hear more and more about that.  I just wish this story was more EMOTIONAL outside of grinding.Also I feel like his undead arent truly loyal so far. There is something along the line of if this beasts is more then 2 ranks above him they wont listen to him. Like I hate that idea but I understand you want to power cap him. Lastly I also hate the fact that he cant cultivate, I want MC to be the best of everything so even cultivators wont look down upon my MC.Author did a very good job at laying a foundational world background which leaves me excited because he has alot of things to explain and explore in the future. Different ARCS.I will review again after chapter 300.

I think I found my new obsession  I'm not usually into warewolves stories but this one completely changed my mind, the plot, the characters, the description, everything is just ??, highly recommend ?

It was a really enjoyable read so far, im caught up and its good, the only flaw I see is that everything its going to fast, I would recomend to take a slower pace but world and characters are likable.