Infinite Ascension: Andrew Paul's Odyssey - Reviews

Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior SystemAnother novel with a cheesy long title, but it’s a top ranker on Webnovel’s charts and others tales by Aoki Aku are also highly praised. After a lot of fantasy, I’m in for some science-fiction for a change, so why not ?The setting is not hard SF, more like a space opera, although more grounded than Star Wars. While it draws heavy inspirations from top SF universes (Warhammer 40K, Mass Effect or Alien/Predator, among others), it really feels unique and original. It also includes plenty of well-coordinated elements of strategy, politics, economy, diplomacy, social, technology … that give consistency to the whole and make it feel alive. It truly is one of the highlights of the book.The other is the characters, especially the two protagonists. Yes, because there are two, the power couple Keres Max and Nico Tarith, one can’t go without the other. One is a more classic hero down-to-earth with amazing tactical and psychological insights, the other is a battle-maniac with a gift for technology and massacre, both are intelligent, strong, funny and made for one another. The secondary characters are also well-made, not as detailed but good enough for the screentime they get. Of note are Nico’s mother Mary and the group of Envoy from the Alliance. The only downside is the final antagonist who, while understandably mysterious, doesn’t get enough attention.The power system is really well-thought. For one, it is not exclusive to the protagonists, in fact, this nanobots-based power is the trademark of the empire where they are born, they just have the highest level of compatibility possible with it. This system gives special powers specific to each person as they pass thresholds in their physical abilities while raising their physical peak to superhuman levels. Max tends to get, beside his initial mind-reading power, more combat-oriented abilities, whereas Nico gets more engineering/hacking perks. You could also consider the memories they get from their previous lives as part of their power, but since there are related to mostly unrecorded ancient times, they are a boon but not always relevant.The story is very good, with a fine progression of the stakes from the small and local (on a galactic scale) to the universe shaking, with a great variety of subjects, involving matter of war, politics, discovery, romance (amazingly told, that’s rare), a lot like Babylon 5, but more light-hearted. The problem here is the ending, which is rushed and a bit frustrating, although the author makes it clear this novel is only the first part of an epic tale.The writing is very good, the action gives sensations like fine anime mecha/power-armor combat scenes, the intrigue parts are also greatly described and the exchanges between the two MCs are a real treat. What prevents the writer from being qualitied as “excellent” are the various typos, grammar and homophones mistakes (few but a bit cringy for a tale that well-told) and the pacing, especially toward the last fifth of the novel. I understand that Aoki Aku intended to write a multiple parts story, and it relieved me to know this end is but a pause, but there should have been a better way to prepare the reader for this.Still, even with its bad sides, Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System is a very good SF novel, borderline excellent. Great characters (one of the best power couple of protagonists I’ve read about), fine system, excellent setting, a very good story served by a writing of equal level, my final verdict is a high 8 out 10 (and it could have been 9 with a better ending/transition to part 2). Aoki Aku deserves his spot as one of Webnovel’s best original author, I will be reading the next part of Max and Nico’s tale when it will be out and likely read another story by him in the meantime.Kergonan out

straight up trash after 100+ ch. Don't read.                                                                                             

What can i say about this novel is that it has no taste simply it’s bland novel it’s not like yeah we got the washed troops but it has its own taste nah this novel for the first 20 chapters got no tasteGasha system op from the start top of his generation one girl in the harem and a maid I mean we can live with that i am a sucker for the loot so i just read it for the skills and the loot but <-Wrong cultivation stages names <-horrible description for the skills <-battle scenes are **** they are playing skill cards there is no battle But if you are a sucker for gasha skills and loot maybe it will be better in late chaps

Very good pleas keep writing.                                                                                                                  

the story is too slow till now chapters 86?the progress to kill protagonist is just barely there and this is like multi jump world type thing and he still barely making progress in his 1st world, and I didn't even like the protagonist,

This is a really great novel!Has a lot of potential, like, God-tier to be honest!That is how great this novel can be ?PS: Not an exaggeration.

Generic monster taming novel. Nothing more needs to be said.

I hope that the author would continue writing, the world building is interesting and there is a potential that the novel would become more interesting as more chapters would come

The story starts off very intriguing! It makes me wonder what else will lead the MC to what happens in the beginning. It’s also very well written so that the story flows without grammatical distractions.

"You know, I never liked humans who carry guns." Dek's voice could be heard from behind. As he turned, the kid was face to face with a skeleton hund who had the body of the man that just saved them.

The room's floor is covered with a dark brown carpet. It's walls are red, slashes and holes across them. There's a small dusty bar to the left of me, some drinks still sitting there. With only a few dirty red couches spread out across the empty room, most of the few dozen people here are sitting on the ground.

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