Inexorable Immortal - Reviews

yes Mc played sevaral vr rpg and thinks about all the possibilities and chances to improve his fighting ability but and starts good upto 27 chaptets and get fairy guide and stops thinking even simplest things and it turns worse he got boost to fight an enemy but forget he had good skill that increases his attack powet and panics when boost was about end and was repairminded by fairy it was very boring to read to begin with but it gets even worse

This novel is a breath of fresh air in many ways. The grammar’s a ****y bit weaker than some, but that hardly affects the experience. You’ll find that the author, Suiyan, has a fetish for mass releases (don’t think of anything dirty). The story progresses nicely on a slowly quickening rate. From the first few chapters to the latest, you’ll always find tidbits to enhance your knowledge on what the core plot is. Does he have to reach the peak of the world? Save his loved one? Save his race? Extend his life span enough to not die? The answer is: Yes. Like I said, it’s a breath of fresh air, and the same goes for the characters. You don’t have that faultless  main character that never does bad, or commits mass genocide and goes “I won’t let the world walk over me” or something of the like. Here, our MC, Krune is genuinely good, not from his character description, but rather his actions. While he comes of as a little wimpy, character development that sees him taking on new, and the cliched shameless trait exist. But, this only enhances the comedy, ‘cause the Novel is easily top three in comedy. The side characters, while kinda generic at the beginning, diversify in their characters later on. This, also, is a plus. For world background, you have a literal multiverse and a higher realm, but the plot never feels like it’s larger than its current setting. To me, that would mean that if he’s in a village, you could get knowledge on the cities, but the readers don’t immediately focus on what happens after he leaves the village, but rather the village itself. I’m not entirely sure what constitutes an amazing background, but I think it’s good enough if it’s there and doesn’t overshadow the foreground before it’s the main focus. Nonetheless, the world is expansive with the author not only expanding on it based on size/location but also based on how the people’s views change in the different parts. Or at the very least confirming that it won’t just be a cliche “go to city, go to competition, go to school, offend big guy run away, find something useful, repeat steps one to five with a ‘capital state’ rather than ‘city’, goes back to city and floor the big guy before we forget about him.” Krune is not the type that lets conflict dictate his worldview. All in all, it’s a great, kinda lighthearted read. I love it. Hope you try it if you’re reading this.

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I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good

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Okay where do I start…. I dont really understand why this novel has such a high rating. I started reading it only because I generally like this kind of story and it had a high rating. Now after about 60 Chapters I’m dropping it out of the following reasons: - Fighting in general is just unrealistic. Take the first few chapters for example: Untrained, weak and stupid MC gets chased by a pack of wolves. He climbs on a tree, breaks off a few twigs, somehow magically sharpens them and then throws them like olympic champion and impales all enemies….Of course ! And stuff like that happens again and again. - The System/Powerscaling is just completely random. He basically just kills wolfs at first, which are like the weakest creatures, and suddenly he is the stongest guy in town. As if every other citizen never fought a single battle. Apparently the wolves are pretty abundant in this reason but only he leveled up significantly. I mean he is the hero but as far as I know, that just means he has no level cap. A System is a good way to set up a frame for your story. How do things work? What are you capable off and what do you need to do to get stronger. Doesn’t really work if your MC is playing by different rules! And dont even talk about the 400 ultimate skills he colllects left an right from every mop character that exists . - The MC is just annoying….he starts as a guy who has basically no self esteem, no real will to live and who doesnt stand up for himsel….that itself is not a bad thing, it’s just how the story is. Then he gives up his humanity and becomes a typical cliche villain who explains his evil plan, mocks his opponent for beeing week and then gets nearly killed in the next second .He just feels inconsistent….For example he just knows lots off stuff that he actually shouldn’t know just because he read a book for a few hours and in the next second he makes completely stupid decisions, like killing three guys and stealing their wagon afterwards. I mean if i kill someone the first thin i do is stealing their car and park it in my driveway ? Well if you can look over the things i wrote, than you might enjoy this novel but i stopped reading it and will probably not continue it. I’m no native speaker, if you find some mistakes, you are allowed to keep them ?

Hope this book is picked because I love it.

"This lowly one understands."

Ayan na naman ang kaba sa dibdib ko. Lalong bumibilis ang pagtibok nito ng pabagsak na sumara ng kusa ang bintana at napapikit ako ng marinig ko ang malakas na pag ungol ng aso sa malayo. Napahawak pa ako sa pantaloon na suot ko. Literal na basa ang kamay ko gawa ng pawis ko.

"So Ania, what happened to your brothers and sisters aren't their choice. They were forced to be one and can't do anything about it. In Ara's case, she joins the project to give you and your brothers a good life. Tyler exchanged his humanity for life, Slacovich got tricked and was forced to be experimented, Sofie in the other hand search for something interesting and joins the project, Li agreed on this to save his friend's life and lastly, Diego was promised by the government for his father's medication. Now do you think if there's no exchange they would agree on it?" Harry can see her sad face. He knew that everything he said sinks inside her. She fully understood the consequences and the sacrifices they've all been.

Her face becomes deep red as she says while hesitating

Misty: Hey Ash