Overall the story is good.
The beginning was a bit slow and hard to get through, but as the chapters grew, the momentum and quality started to pickup.
We know about the characters and their backgrounds, but we don't know about them personally except what they feel now.
The world development has a lot of potential to grow, but it's not there yet. If it's developed too fast the story will go to shit with the current scale, too slow and nothing happens. It's beginning to make more sense, but we currently only know two cities, one village, and the MC's inner space. The world set up could be better because don't really know what races there are, where they're placed, or even a general outline of the continent or world.
The quality is good, but it still needs more time to make sense and mature.
