Inayah's Kismet - Reviews

I like the story but it's a little too slow.

Some of my biggest issues with this story are the weird slang the voice chick uses, the pacing and the MC. Slam donkeys? Pay pigging? Those terms make me cringe! The story picks up pace after the fourth chapter and before that, things are really slow. The funniest part so far was the thong scene in chapter five and that's it. The author constantly brings up the MC's hair and weight and constantly makes fun of him for it. Those jokes get old fast. Ben reminds me of Michael Scott but younger and self-aware of the fact that people don't like him. I like comedic stories where bad things happen to an unlikable protagonist (i.e. Dwight Schrute in The Office) but this story didn't make me laugh much

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

Well narrated story..kept me hooked up...I am waiting when Evan will mature......................................................................,.....,.,..................................................Author write chapters a bit fast....If u can do that..it will be excellent......

romantic?..................................................................................................................................................................

I really love it I thought that it is a really good concept and the quality’s really good❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Hey, the author is here to shamelessly rate my own novel!But on a serious note, this novel has been flowing in my brain for quite a long time and finally i get the change to share it with you guys.It's similar to The World Online, as i said in my author's notes however this won't be a copy & paste type of story.Enjoy it, it is not for those who wish to read a 'grand novel' with 'exceptional world building', it's just a story to read when you are bored and stuff.

I read this one a few weeks ago but didn't leave a review. I just re-read it and still manages to make me smile. I'm looking forward for the next update.

"Okay take care."

"Unfortunately she does, since this is the decision of the principal." Lance retorted still keeping the suspicious smile on his face.

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