In Your Dreams - Reviews

The plot is very predictable. mc says only power is important in this world, but he himself is stupid, naive, does not build logic. He should use his brain and not make unnecessary enemies, but he acts without thinking. The system is in the hands of the wrong person again :D

can't say much with 2 chapters so I'm just gonna 5 star everything...........................................................................

Good job! good story good worldI only have a problem with the MC. She is obsessed with becoming an explorer, but her personality is soo timid and unadventurous. well written and enjoyable

Iori's improved quite a bit over the last 6 months!]

                   TO BE COUNTINUED

Aeyldarr and the Avraerion were victorious against the evil and brought redemption to the world.

"So you are saying me that you confessed to Jimin already and he said that he will think about it?" I raised my brow. "Yeah Ggukie. I am so happy that he is willing to think about giving me a chance." came Rose's voice from the other end of the call. I poked my cheek with my tongue hearing her getting excited like she got my Jimin. No girl I won't let that happen not under my ing watch. "Oh I have to cut the call, my brother is calling me." The call ended leaving my mood completely ruined. So I will loose you again hyung? I clenched my fist in anger. The main door burst open and I saw Jimin hyung walking inside. "Where were you?" He looked up into my eyes and that was when I realized that he was crying. "What happen? Are you OK?" I rushed to him and caressed his face. He nodded. "I-I am fine." He mumbled and removed my hand before walking into the kitchen. "Where were you hyung?" I asked concerned after following him to the kitchen. "I was with Tae." He replied and filled him a glass of water. I furrowed my eyebrows. "What were you doing with him?" "Oh god Gguk stop asking all these already! I am tired and I want to sleep." That's when I realized that his lips were swollen. "Did you kiss him?" I growled and grabbed his arm to stop him from going. "None of your ing business!" He pushed me and walked out making me more irritated. First Rose who told me that Jimin will consider about being with her and now Taehyung whom he kissed. "Jeon Jimin you cannot ignore me like this." I followed him. "What do you want?" He turned around before he was about to enter into his room "Don't you realize by now what I ing want!?" I shouted. "Gguk please. I am not in the mood of arguing with you so leave me alone." "Oh right. You never have time for me but for others!" "There is nothing like that." "Oh please. Stop pretending like you care about my feeling BECAUSE YOU DON'T! How can you be so oblivious about my feelings for you hyung?" "What you mean?" I scoffed sarcastically. "Don't pretend that you never realized what I think about you." I growled. "God Gguk stop giving me puzzles and come straight to the point already." I gritted my teeth. "I ING LOVE YOU HYUNG!!!" I shouted "And no it's not brotherly."

"Would I like to learn . . . how to play chess?" She asked hesitantly.

            A fine day , the younger saw one of  the person in the mob  going separately and Champ attacks and kills him as the revenge of the sisters death.The other 2 in the gang ,next day plans  to catch the younger and kill him . the younger came in front of them and pretends that he is frightened by them and manages them to take to his elder brother and these both wants to talk to them ,but they starts attacking  so these 2 brothers  decides to kill them and make society free of these rudes.....They didn't kill them but they took the 2 idiots to far of the society and tied them to a single chain in the room and they were offered food for the 3 times  a week total ...

so this book is really good I'm actually speaking as a fan right now it's so crazy how the author has improved I'll like more people to look at it and follow the book

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