In The Name Of Lovee - Reviews

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i was gonna skip cause of the lower ratings until i realized most of them didn't even read the story. Im glad i gave it a try cause im in love with it.

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I don’t know what i am reading, nothing makes sense. The novel starts of just weird and no explanations are given so I don’t know what is going on it seems like I’m expected to know the plot and what is goin on. And no I won’t read a few more chapters because i would get an explanation i will just find some other novel that will be more entertaining than this one. Hard to write an accurate review when nothing and everything is happening.

Grandpa Shan shifted his grip on his spirit. "Please put the idiot down."

''can you tell me where am I and what is my situation?'' Ray

As she breached the canopy, her hair burst out behind her like a flame in the wind, and her wings, that would put a monarch butterfly's to shame blossomed with the sun's light catching her from behind. The great forest was all she could see in all directions, stretching like a great green garden of the gods. Alfheim, a land known for it's beauty and unwelcoming inhabitants. From the realms of men to the south and west to the dwarf-holds to the east and the savage lands to the north, the great forest connected them all from her place in the centre of the world.

"Chill woman, my beautiful ass is getting there in a minute, don't you worry." I stand up and stretch my arms. The bell rings as students scurry around like ants, some eyes watch us in anticipation of a showdown.

United States Oliver Hazard Perry

I'm pretty sure you can't so just change the title to   deleted or stopped or something

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

if he ends up being a hero don't tag a villain