In the Chains of Fate - Reviews

WOW!!! I really love the suspense and the intriguing flow this book has. Karina you freaking did it again. This book is giving me a new light. I love it

chapter 12? and more? hehehe

4/5 + until Black Rock Ruins, then the quality drops real fast. The translation is good but there are issues with pronouns in most of the chaps, but it was still okay. The story was progressing nicely and everything was good.But during Black Rock Ruins, everything goes downhill, the translation goes off, there is even no mention of who the pronoun is denoting. Then there is a continuous series of face slapping moments. MC defeats one guy whom everyone thinks he can't defeat and persuades him to step back. then another guy comes and same thing keeps on repeating. Dropping the novel now. Might resume it if it gets completed.

Do we have any idea what the raw is for this one? Because it's quite clearly a totally different story(or possibly two or three) which the editor has randomly smashed into unrecognizable trash with the consistency of diarrhea. I'm quite interested in finding out just how terrible this editor is at this by reading the free chapters of the raw, even if it's faloo.

Hey author here! I just wanna start by saying...thank you. So far this is one of my best books and we aren't even half way done! I've never even dreamt of reaching these kinds of numbers or even getting as much support as I've been getting. I want to keep up the momentum and keep everyone satisfied. This book is by no means perfect even for me, I see heavy flaws such as character consistency and plot development, but over time I'm getting better. Once again. From the bottom of my heart thank you. I really appreciate you all and hope you all keep supporting as the chapters continue ❤️

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Bro, I was reading this on a whim, but when I started, I couldn't stop, so please don't stop either

She fell as well.

after one hour

Yes.

He had seen it all, the suffering, his pain, the mistakes of his past multiplied by a hundred was forced back unto his cracking heart with the force of a thrown javelin. There was nothing he could do,

"Legendary Weapon Creation Magic: Felling of the Sky Demon, Balmung." As I said that I pulled the A-rank Noble Phantasm. As I summoned it, I could feel my energy being used up to create it. Thankfully, the actual energy needed in its creation was much lower than I expected. I estimated that it took about half the usual energy than what I originally used back in my old world. Furthermore, the rejection of the world that would normally make my copy a whole grade lower is now much weaker to the point that the difference in power between a copy and the original was minimal.