In Retirement Playing Games - Reviews

I like this novel so far, it’s really good!!!!!!!! I hate that we need to write 140 o4 something characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Man you surprise me with this sweet story. Great work!  And for the readers I just can only say try it! ---------------------------

Ayo, it's the Author here. Just want to say, if you're looking for a novel entirely based in a video game, this won't be for you. This novel does have IRL parts in it, some expanding for a couple of chapters even.
However, if this novel is what you're looking for, I hope you enjoyed the read. Remember, if you like it, vote for it and leave a review.

NOICE, hopefully you keep this novel going consistently, wish you all the best so you don't drop it. 140 Characters is a stupid thing, this is a fricken pain in the ass AHHHHH

Nice enjoyable read. The characters all have different personalities that seem to fuse together quite nicely. I would say this is currently levels greater than your other novel in terms of character and world-building.
You don't dump chapters of information on us but rather use certain parts of information during crucial times similar to other novels.
Anyway, hope you continue doing what you're doing and make sure not to overwork yourself with school and maintaining both novels have steady updaate.

Very good so far. Keep up the good work.

Unfinished and left behind , plenty of errors  even actions that a Veteran would do, did not really make since .. Concept is good.. But the devil is in the details

Hey there!

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This is a really great story so far really hope you pick it back up. I will be moving on to the beast master book as well. Stay in good health and good spirits.

Your stories are amazing keep it up I love them
















Ungovernable I have a great day and I will be a good time to get the same as the only thing I can

Good Stuff MATTTEEEEEEEE!
Writing quality; could have some improvements but my English ain't all that good anyway.
Stability of updates; I don't really care, as long as chapters are released frequently. Obviously, real life isn't that simple in which someone can easily release chapters daily.
Story development; I like.
Character design; I like a lot. Muscle Men and Bald Bros for life.
World background; pretty good, it's basically modern with just slightly more advanced technology.